I like this. Your work is always really solid. The only criticism that I'd have is that your brush strokes are always so big. I feel like some of these outlines would benefit from a smaller stroke. At a certain point these decisions are simply a matter of taste and personal preference so if you hate the idea, feel free to ignore it. I just feel like a combination of different stroke sizes might make the piece pop more. Otherwise it tends to look a little fuzzy.